Moe
Yaa
In Acholi, mo ya is the oil of the shea tree. The new identity keeps that root and drops everything else that was shouting: no glitter, no script, no brochure on the front of the jar. Deep aubergine, a single line of gold, plenty of room.
One master brand, with the maker behind it
Following the brief's recommendation: Moe Yaa leads on shelf and online; Shea Luxury Essentials steps back as the formulator and endorser — the Land Rover / Defender move. The name no longer limits the range to shea, so lip, hair and body lines sit under it naturally.
Set in capitals, spaced wide, finished in gold
Purple and gold, made quiet
The purple your customers already know, deepened to a matte aubergine. Gold carries the luxury in one thin line. Ivory gives the second colourway and the white jar somewhere to land.
Two typefaces, nothing else
Front sells. Sides inform.
Same 250 g tub and footprint as today. The front panel now carries only the name, product, key butters and net weight; everything regulatory moves to the side panels. Copy rewritten against the BP review comments.
P.O. Box 26342, [City], [Country]
+256 706 191 214 · +254 790 418 911
moeyaa.com · @moeyaa Handmade in East Africa
Every comment, answered
| Label item | BP comment | What the new label does |
|---|---|---|
| Product name | Company is SLE, product is Platinum Body Butter. | Front reads Moe Yaa · Platinum Body Butter. Skin-type line kept short: "For dry, sensitive & combination skin". |
| Description | Too long — lead with moisturise, hydrate, natural glow, soft & supple. | Cut from 110 to 33 words. The four buzzwords become foil-outlined badges. |
| Skin benefits | Can this merge with the description? | Merged. The separate benefits block is gone. |
| Ingredients | Re-check; clarify rosehip and olive; emulsifier missing. | Rewritten as an INCI list with olive and rosehip named. Emulsifier slot left open for the formulator to fill — Client to confirm |
| Directions | Too long. | Four short sentences, 27 words. |
| Contact address | Needs clarity. | Single legal maker line, P.O. box with city and country, both numbers, web and handle. Client to confirm city |
| Batch & expiry | Not included. | Batch / MFG / EXP fields for inkjet or stamp, plus a 12-month period-after-opening mark. |
Built to grow past shea
Every product shares the aubergine ground, gold wordmark and italic product name. Only the descriptor changes — so a shelf of Moe Yaa reads as one brand.
Product names Gloss, Silk and Velvet are proposals for the lines named in the brief — swap freely.
The same restraint, everywhere else
+254 790 418 911
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One ritual. Platinum Body Butter — shea, cocoa, mango, cupuaçu.